Back in 2007,
director Donlee Brussel submitted a film to our website called
"Cabbie." It was a short comedy about a cabbie played by Steve
Gelder who approaches his job with passion and a stiff tongue in
cheek attitude. The movie was less than watchable up viewing the
short. Two years later, Donlee Brussel has taken his original twenty
minute short comedy and reduced it to fourteen minutes with a
heavily edited final product that has a more definite and even tone
as opposed to the last cut that needed some drastic work on the
comedic atmosphere and storytelling. Was this second chance worth it
from Brussel? Honestly no. The same caveats that plagued the
original cut are still pretty much evident here. The script seems to
be working hard at depicting this aspiring Cab Driver as someone who
is inept but is more certain about his dreams than most other
people. The problem with that being is his comedic one liners fall
flat (for example: the shooting presidents rant) yet again because
his portrayal is uneven. Are we supposed to pity this man whose
dream job isn't exactly something an average American would want to
do, or are we supposed to laugh at him because he can't aim higher
in his life goals? In between the interview questions actor Steve
Gelder gives it his best to provide this image as an American schlub
doomed to working as a cab driver all his life, but there's just so
little going on with the one joke premise that it can't even fill in
the fourteen minutes. While it does cut some of the extra fat, the
resolution is the same: "Cabbie" works with good comedic intentions
but never quite decides what genre it is as a short film.